They’d been ravaged where they stood, their fleshy throats torn open, skin hanging like a curtain at a peep show. The reins were rust colored with the dried blood and it splattered against the wagon in macabre patterns.
A little girl’s pink dress was ripped to shreds, red stains on the hem and the sleeves. Molly steeled herself for the rest of the scene. If she kept looking, she had a good idea what she’d find. She took a deep breath and rounded the wagon.
Vivid description, Saranna. Great six.
ReplyDeleteWow, great description!
ReplyDeleteGreat description of a massacre
ReplyDeleteOh, so vivid, intense and descriptive. Well done.
ReplyDeleteWow. Great description. I like your focus on details--the blood on the reins, stain on the dress's hem. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteOh, excruciating, visceral description.
ReplyDeletevivid. I felt like I was see a car wreak on the road and unable to look away but feeling terrible about it
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